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Q. The evidence or more clues is for a novel that I started when I was like 14 years old and realized that I left out one character finding clues in a bedroom. The title of my novel is A Series of Sisters-A Dead Family Member.
Here's a description of what my story is about: Three sisters and their best friends go on an adventure to find the sisters deceased grandfather. What the girls discover is very shocking and then they decided to go on another adventure searching for clues to find out what the killer has been up to and where the person currently lives. The girls have nothing to do with the killing, but someone else does and it's someone no one expects.
Here's the evidence/other clues I've stated in my story:
Kitchen: Ice& Ice Cream in the freezer--nothing in the fridge, sharp knife w/blood stains on it on the counter top.
Dining Room: 4 plates--2 were completely empty and the other two were 1/2 empty.
D.B. Floor: sisters' grandfather's clothes w/blood stains on them.
Living Room: Found tons of $ under couch cushions. Found a box of cigarettes w/initials, M.G.H. on the back and a few coins.
Found together= a note from the sisters grandfather.
Upstairs, Master Bed: 2 wine bottles, a vase w/flowers inside it, girl clothes on the floor that were black, black nail polish on the dresser, a journal w/note and clue inside it. Master Bath: girl jeans w/blood stains on them and about 3 curling irons. Hall Bathroom: 2 toothbrushes and a hairbrush w/no hair on it.
Upstairs, far right bedroom/smaller: little kid clothes, note inside a jacket pocket w/a song on it. Drawers: underwear, pull-ups, socks, tiny jeans, swear pants, and pajamas. Desk drawer: A bunch of journals w/songs in them, very few journals with math equations in them, and one bad journal 'cause of what the kid had said about her dad.
I have evidence for four out my five characters that are in my story. I just need evidence for my last character of what could possibly be found in the upstairs bedroom and it is slightly bigger than the little kid's room, but obviously smaller than the master bedroom.
If anyone could think of any good evidence, please give suggestions! Please do not give me anything inappropriate like con*oms. Any suggestions are appreciated, but nothing inappropriate please!
And a Happy New Year to all! :)
Here's a description of what my story is about: Three sisters and their best friends go on an adventure to find the sisters deceased grandfather. What the girls discover is very shocking and then they decided to go on another adventure searching for clues to find out what the killer has been up to and where the person currently lives. The girls have nothing to do with the killing, but someone else does and it's someone no one expects.
Here's the evidence/other clues I've stated in my story:
Kitchen: Ice& Ice Cream in the freezer--nothing in the fridge, sharp knife w/blood stains on it on the counter top.
Dining Room: 4 plates--2 were completely empty and the other two were 1/2 empty.
D.B. Floor: sisters' grandfather's clothes w/blood stains on them.
Living Room: Found tons of $ under couch cushions. Found a box of cigarettes w/initials, M.G.H. on the back and a few coins.
Found together= a note from the sisters grandfather.
Upstairs, Master Bed: 2 wine bottles, a vase w/flowers inside it, girl clothes on the floor that were black, black nail polish on the dresser, a journal w/note and clue inside it. Master Bath: girl jeans w/blood stains on them and about 3 curling irons. Hall Bathroom: 2 toothbrushes and a hairbrush w/no hair on it.
Upstairs, far right bedroom/smaller: little kid clothes, note inside a jacket pocket w/a song on it. Drawers: underwear, pull-ups, socks, tiny jeans, swear pants, and pajamas. Desk drawer: A bunch of journals w/songs in them, very few journals with math equations in them, and one bad journal 'cause of what the kid had said about her dad.
I have evidence for four out my five characters that are in my story. I just need evidence for my last character of what could possibly be found in the upstairs bedroom and it is slightly bigger than the little kid's room, but obviously smaller than the master bedroom.
If anyone could think of any good evidence, please give suggestions! Please do not give me anything inappropriate like con*oms. Any suggestions are appreciated, but nothing inappropriate please!
And a Happy New Year to all! :)
Answer
Bedroom: an open and unlocked window with footprints on the ground outside, mud stains on the carpet, a diary with entries for the past 6 to 12 months, clothing removed from drawers and over the floor, a key taped to the back of a painting on the wall.
Good luck :)
Bedroom: an open and unlocked window with footprints on the ground outside, mud stains on the carpet, a diary with entries for the past 6 to 12 months, clothing removed from drawers and over the floor, a key taped to the back of a painting on the wall.
Good luck :)
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